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I my debate will be about horror and should they suspense and build up to climax . I think they should build more stuff to it so it would be more interested in and when the story get to the bit you feel more frightened . If a part is told it mite give away the good bit so i’m staying with choice of leave the audience guessing and thinking of ways the could solve the problems.
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Braulio Stefan Pilates Chimbembe Autobiography
I was born 2003 September 30th a month before my best friends birthday . I was a very cute baby and an interesting one to. I liked to go outside everyday but I usually didn’t . I liked the cold not to keen on very hot days unless my mum bought me sushi some cold water ice cream and chips !! I kinda liked those days. As a child I quite shy and but I overcame it when I went to east west nursery . ust when I started to make some friends I had an accident with my brother an where playing around and I took his car then he ran to the kitchen and found one of he knife on a table then he cut me on my face and that most of what I remember happened .The following week I went to school everyone was looking and I didn’t see it but I knew it was bad and I didn’t know what to do or who talk to and all my friends left me they didn’t support me or stand up for me.
Once I moved to primary and I met a boy named Alex he was cool and he never left me out he was my best friend we moved up some years when we when to year 1 we met a boy called Carlos and he was into computer games and I wasn’t I was more athletic person . I started to play with another friend Xavier and Michael they were trouble maker and I got drawn in with them Xavier was smart and Michael was cheeky and I was soon to find out . A coupled days later we were messing around and we got sent to Mr keen (the headteacher) he called my mum I was so scared . Home time was getting closer and closer I was thinking what my mother was going to think . Its home time and my mum says it not like you to get in trouble and the next day I couldn’t play with anyone or I would get into trouble so at play time I just sat there and at lunch I ate very slowly. I had five minutes to play it was good cause I just played running up and down then the whistle went and I ran to line and lined up. I did that the rest of the years ….and year 2 too.
Year 3 came along I was finding the work quite hard times table but I was trying my best I had good times and bad it was ok I was trying my best that year I only got in to trouble 1 time I got in trouble was for not doing my homework or something. I went back to east west nursery they picked me up when.
Year 4 I reunited Alex and started go down and I started playing more games and not working my teacher said I should just stop getting into fights and dance battles because I would get in trouble miss Barnes at parents evening was straight forward “he is bad and doesn’t concentrate ” said miss Barnes from that day on I never liked her. when she said she was leave nearly EVERYONE said oho we are going to miss you ! I said yes so loud she told me to get out ….. when she left she gave me a look I was about to run away but I just stood there.. .. she left .
Year 5 and 6 was so boring work was hard but I got on with it. Sat’s was cool but what I was looking forward to was school journey all the year 6 here to is I was so fun and it couldn’t of been better we had a stash of sweets and cool toys all we did was play. So when it came to activity I try my best. I found out I was GOOD at sport that when I decide I wanted to go London nautical school. It was a sport basiced and army so that what I wanted to with most of my life.
Now im have started school i have injoyed it and i think i fit in well .
In this essay I will talk about once and my evidence and quotation. In my paragraphs I will talk about what kind of child was Felix ? When Felix was In doubt he thought of good, when Felix escaped the orphanage he had know what his journey would be like . My paragraphs will show this point and evidence.
I think Felix is a courageous person .He narrates that “the poor can’t go on this. She needs to know the truth , this quotation refers to Zelda as the “poor kid” and he is courageous because he actually tells Zelda and many people wouldn’t have the guts to tell her . At this part of the story Felix is felling worried , sad and thoughtful . He is thoughtful because he doesn’t want Zelda to carry on felling sad and he would want her to sad !
I think Felix is a generous , kind and courageous . He narrates ” aright I mumble , first a pee, then Breakfast ” I think he is generous because he helps Dodie out and mother Minka . He kind because he give away the carrot . He is outstandingly ,courageous and naive because he didn’t know that world war 2 happening He kind for helping Zelda and looking after her. he is Courageous for pulling her out the fire and telling her that her parents died.
I think Felix is determine. He narrates that ” that’s not true , he shouts ! mum and dad sent that carrot as a sign ‘ this quotation refers to Felix’s parents and he thinking they are still alive . At this part of the book Felix told mother Minka about the carrot and that his parents were coming to get him. mother Minka tells him that sister Elvira put it there this proves my point because he fought for them to tell that his parents would be Ok .
Felix is brave person because in the story it narrates that “we’ve got to risk it “, he say this quotation refers to Felix , Zelda and Chya jumping to save their lives. The quotation comes when the Jewish people got taking away by Nazi and they eventually escaped from the train. this proves my point because they jumped the train and he will carry on his adventure . so he is brave to jump and find his parents but unfortunately when they jumped Chya the poor little girl died she was shot by gun on top of the train and her died body lied there piece fully but as kind as Felix was he moved the body to a much nicer area and he put flowers around her.
conclusion: I have talked about Felix being : brave, generous, kind, courageous and determine . I believe that Felix made good decisions and choice he was never really negative most I think he was quite adventurous and good fun but most time he would be write or try to make things better. He had a good upbringing because he knew that his parent were in some kinda trouble and he knew he had to save them.
My book is divergent I really like the book, it’s a very good book and the film is amazing.
Divergent is my favourite by far it think it an interesting book/film I think you have to read a least twice to fully understand its quite a long read but an outstanding outcome story . It’s so good it has NO.1 New York Times best-selling. (fact)
My experience with this book was amazing I picked from our school library up and the blurb cached my attention.
Quote from revives “taut and shiveringly ” Melissa Marr, best-selling authour of Wicked lovely ” Main character are Beatrice prior aka “tris” , Tobias aka “four”, Caleb prior I liked all of the character because they a sent a message to me and they good actors.
my read journal by Braulio Stefan pilartes Chimbembe
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