Braulio Stefan Pilates Chimbembe Autobiography
I was born 2003 September 30th a month before my best friends birthday . I was a very cute baby and an interesting one to. I liked to go outside everyday but I usually didn’t . I liked the cold not to keen on very hot days unless my mum bought me sushi some cold water ice cream and chips !! I kinda liked those days. As a child I quite shy and but I overcame it when I went to east west nursery . ust when I started to make some friends I had an accident with my brother an where playing around and I took his car then he ran to the kitchen and found one of he knife on a table then he cut me on my face and that most of what I remember happened .The following week I went to school everyone was looking and I didn’t see it but I knew it was bad and I didn’t know what to do or who talk to and all my friends left me they didn’t support me or stand up for me.
Once I moved to primary and I met a boy named Alex he was cool and he never left me out he was my best friend we moved up some years when we when to year 1 we met a boy called Carlos and he was into computer games and I wasn’t I was more athletic person . I started to play with another friend Xavier and Michael they were trouble maker and I got drawn in with them Xavier was smart and Michael was cheeky and I was soon to find out . A coupled days later we were messing around and we got sent to Mr keen (the headteacher) he called my mum I was so scared . Home time was getting closer and closer I was thinking what my mother was going to think . Its home time and my mum says it not like you to get in trouble and the next day I couldn’t play with anyone or I would get into trouble so at play time I just sat there and at lunch I ate very slowly. I had five minutes to play it was good cause I just played running up and down then the whistle went and I ran to line and lined up. I did that the rest of the years ….and year 2 too.
Year 3 came along I was finding the work quite hard times table but I was trying my best I had good times and bad it was ok I was trying my best that year I only got in to trouble 1 time I got in trouble was for not doing my homework or something. I went back to east west nursery they picked me up when.
Year 4 I reunited Alex and started go down and I started playing more games and not working my teacher said I should just stop getting into fights and dance battles because I would get in trouble miss Barnes at parents evening was straight forward “he is bad and doesn’t concentrate ” said miss Barnes from that day on I never liked her. when she said she was leave nearly EVERYONE said oho we are going to miss you ! I said yes so loud she told me to get out ….. when she left she gave me a look I was about to run away but I just stood there.. .. she left .
Year 5 and 6 was so boring work was hard but I got on with it. Sat’s was cool but what I was looking forward to was school journey all the year 6 here to is I was so fun and it couldn’t of been better we had a stash of sweets and cool toys all we did was play. So when it came to activity I try my best. I found out I was GOOD at sport that when I decide I wanted to go London nautical school. It was a sport basiced and army so that what I wanted to with most of my life.
Now im have started school i have injoyed it and i think i fit in well .

May 12, 2016 at 8:05 pm
Your autobiography is very interesting but in the other hand I think you should touble check it because you got some mistakes.
June 13, 2016 at 10:14 am
Hi Braulio, Ardley is certainly right. It is very interesting to read your biography but there are some basic errors. One problem is that you do not use capital letters enough. You also swap between present and past tense too often. Finally, take care over how you use apostrophes.
Let me know when you do your second draft.
June 14, 2016 at 11:16 am
Doing it now
June 15, 2016 at 4:32 pm
Braulio, make sure that you use the right form of “to”, “two” and “too”.